Monday 28 November 2016

Writing slide term 4

This is my slide https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1R6VgcSYP8Dy4PUjD6UiGAzKg2lmg88uX_MdE2_cvlok

Maths slide term 4

You can see my maths slide here https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/10cTNZAd3D2Jhv8MVxtekPzyWOZry3lYGHhlSGC5Hd_E

P.E

WALT: develop fundamental skills required for athletics 
WILF: - Correct technique for throwing the discus and shotput
Correct technique for long jump and high jump
Passing the baton accurately in relay sprints



I am proud of shot put
It was a challenge for me to do high jump but I got past the third level 
My next step is to be a champ 
Next year I would like to become a champ
My best event was shot put because I got it in the last zone


WALT: develop the skills or batting, bowling, throwing, and fielding in cricket


WILF: 
- overarm throwing when fielding
- catching with hands held like a basket
- straight arm bowling
- eyes on the ball and move the bat all the way through when batting


The skill I am best at is catching because I'm really good at it 
My next step is to get better at bolling 






Reading

WALT listen to a novel and reflect on the story as we think about characters,setting,plot and authors purpose

This is workspace 
This is how I know what I'm doing and what task I need to complete 


This explains why Gary Pualsen uses flash backs 

Wednesday 23 November 2016

Camp!

WALT use wow words in our writing 

Camp
Mud is brown in the mud run.
Grass is green on the paddocks we ride horses on.
Waters blue in the river we raft on.
Camp is fun! 
Mosquitos bite 
The moon shines bright at night as we slept in the bivys
At the bivy the stars were sparkling diamonds.




Mud run 
Soft mud on me
The water is deep 
Thorns on my muddy soaking shoes
Yuck


Acrostic poem
Cookies at morning tea and lunch.
Ate like a king.
Mud all over our faces.
People running around having fun.




CAMP
The current looked calm as it drifted. it wasn't calm it pulled as like a rope.
The bees buzzed as the collected pollen.
The daisy's are spread out through the field.
We covered our bivy with a tarp it was like a shield.
The mud was still until children run through it.  
















Sunday 6 November 2016

Writing workshops

Pokemon go adventure 
I biked in the windy hot muggy day, my hair was dripping with sweat my feet we're burning. Was day to Brock’s house with Tama the track was literally on fire. We were going for a meeting. We 
We're catching Pokémon on the way suddenly a man came out “ do you want a iPhone 7?”
“NO”
“Run Tama”
We biked away We went to Brock's. A wild dragonite came out we ran towards it it was ??? Cp.




I caught it with a master ball,after we caught that Pokemon we went into Brock's room we talked about what we are going to make in the future. 
“How about pokèmon go,minecraft,madden,NBA;roblox and challenges”. 






“Ok we will be on your way now”.
We biked back to the place where the creepy guy was;he was still there “do you want a iPhone 8s plus” 
“Tama said yes”. 
Tama grabbed the phone suddenly the man grabbed him he threw him into the van. I raced over to the van opened the door but Tama wasn't there. It was a fake van.




The van took off it was over. I started to cry. Tama was still playing Pokémon go I could track him. He was at a abandon warehouse I dressed up as a worker I grabbed Tama and said “I will lock him in a cell”. We ran out and biked away. After that Tama went home.