This is my favourite piece of writing in term 1

Creeping

10/4/14

Snecing throgh the creecy door,I was affrad that I would get coot. I walked down to the haunted house. I saw a Bigfoot and zombie fight. Bigfoot punched the zombie. The zombie won.

Calvin ran for his life. Meanwhile I fit them all off. I ran home. Just in time.

Inquiry 3.4.14.

Playground

In this story I worked on using interesting sentences with joiners and correct capitals and full stops.

In the playground is damp and cold and I could hear little kids yelling. I can feel the damp air softly pushing on my face when I was playing. I can hear kids yelling as they do science. As I play I can almost taste the damp air.